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You are opposed to any reconciliation,
Dethroning this man's opinion, that man's query.
Forbidding any small continuation,
Of that which is your opinion's contrary.
Blatantly standing, with nothing to defend your hide,
Quickly calling any facts completely untrue.
Even if they have truth, you laugh feeling so snide,
Pulling out a response without any contribute.
Remove your contacts, rose-colored to your stance,
You will soon find bias replaced by balance.
Maybe you will feel more confident in your prance,
Both sides of the story mixed into your chalice.
For sometimes happiness in all living,
Comes from getting as much as giving.
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Oh boy, more experiments! :dummy:

Well, I've been getting at this after a while of looking it up... my first Shakespearian (or English) Sonnet. NOTE: Right off the bat, I do not readily expect this to be any good whatsoever. It's my first one, criticize it if you wish please. I will say, there are most likely huge problems in here. I have used "old english" before in some of my poetry. I'll most certainly be using that in the next one when it comes around.

This is about the type of person who in an argument or debate, is stubborn to the point of just plain ignorance. Like it or not, we're all that way. For at least once in our lives. XD
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~OddballOreo Nov 3, 2011  Student General Artist
Shakespearean sonnets are a bitch to write with their iambic pentameter crap. I give you props just for attempting one. =)

Untrue and contribute don't quite rhyme, but they do end in an e. I'm not sure if that's what you were aiming for, or you couldn't think of another word.

Very nicely done otherwise!
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Thank you! ^^

Ah, that little rhyme was a bit of a swing and a miss... more along the lines of that I couldn't think of another one. I failed there. Next one's going to be 100% rhyme accuracy (I hope), though! >.<
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~NeuzaKC Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
If my Derp sonnet is better than yours then el-oh-el.

Jk anyway, this is very good and thank god you're doing something different for a change. Good on you.
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Thanks so much! I was thinking there was something glaringly wrong somewhere that I couldn't find, since this is the first time and all. :dummy:
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